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    IIISHIII

    Member
    In-Game username: IIISHIII
    DiscordTag (ex. Name#1234): Juice Wrld#9625
    First name (optional): alan
    Current age: 13
    Timezone: Western European Standard Time



    What server(s) are you the most active on? What is it about that particular gamemode that keeps you interested?

    Breachpvp.com (Cactus-MC.net), OneShotmc.com I like doing base stuff talking to staff members about things and raiding bases with my boys, also mainly pvping. I play more of red faction because I don't really like Op factions such as yellow was way to OP and red is just the right amount of OP factions with its stacked armour. What keeps me most active on red is the players that play on red such as my friends that play on it and a couple other people that use to play on old breach that still plays on red today.


    Why should we choose you over any other applicant?

    You shouldn't choose me over any other applicant because they could have better application and they might know a little bit more than me. But also you should choose me over anyone else because I spent a lot of time on the server and try to get to know everyone on the server so if i need them they could help me out.

    Name a mistake you made during your time here on CactusMC. How did you fix that mistake? What did you learn from it?

    One of my biggest mistakes was calling a staff member the N-word a lot. I learned that i should watch what I say to people online because they could take it the wrong way and end up doing something that I never intended for them to do. And also I don't particularly regret my decisions of admitting to hacking, otherwise I wouldn't do it in the begin then. But since then i made better decisions on the way i treat people and the way i play.

    Tell us your previous server moderation experience, with proof if applicable. If you lack previous experience, why should this not greatly affect your chances as a potential staff member?

    I have had a little experience with a couple of my friends on a faction server that we were trying to make. But i don't think it should greatly affect my staff application because i have been with breach (Cactus-MC) For about 3-4 years now and i have seen some things that staff has done right and some done wrong witch i have stepped in and said something about it to a staff member before because it wasn't right for them to do what they did. I also think someone needs to start somewhere to become staff and learn a thing or two. I think it should be me because I've been with Breach(Cactus-MC) for a while now.

    Tell us your greatest strengths. How would these help you during your time staffing, if accepted?

    My biggest strength is hearing people about what they have done and to figure out a way to resolve it with the lowest amount of punishment needed. Also I have a lot of time on my hands to sit down and stare at my screen. I also have a good amount of patients with people having to hear them out and what they have to tell me or what that i need to know.

    What about your greatest weaknesses? How do you get past them?

    I don't really have any weaknesses and i believe that I am a great person. The only one weakness that I know that I have is if someone is talking trash in chat or making fun of someone for no reason towards a friend(real life Friend) Or (in game friend) i will instantly try and stand up for them and get staff on to try and take care of it.

    Are you active on our Discord server?

    Yes, I am active on the discord. I look in it about every hour if I'm not doing anything and ready through what people have to say and what they are talking about. I don't say much in the discord because I have no reason right now to do so.

    Is there anything else you would like to add?

    I think I'm a real easy person to get along with and have a good time with making jokes and stuff like that. And i love breach(Cactus-MC) please bring back quicker.
     

    Lazerzzz

    Member
    Hello alan,

    I would recommend you underline and bold your questions, then color your answers to make it easier to read! Overall a very good application you do have a few mistakes with spaces and putting (.And). Would suggest you go back through and correct those errors other then that good luck!!
     

    xd Azures

    Member
    In-Game username: IIISHIII
    DiscordTag (ex. Name#1234): Juice Wrld#9625
    First name (optional): alan
    Current age: 13
    Timezone: Western European Standard Time



    What server(s) are you the most active on? What is it about that particular gamemode that keeps you interested?

    Breachpvp.com (Cactus-MC.net), OneShotmc.com I like doing base stuff talking to staff members about things and raiding bases with my boys, also mainly pvping. I play more of red faction because I don't really like Op factions such as yellow was way to OP and red is just the right amount of OP factions with its stacked armour. What keeps me most active on red is the players that play on red such as my friends that play on it and a couple other people that use to play on old breach that still plays on red today.


    Why should we choose you over any other applicant?

    You shouldn't choose me over any other applicant because they could have better application and they might know a little bit more than me. But also you should choose me over anyone else because I spent a lot of time on the server and try to get to know everyone on the server so if i need them they could help me out.

    Name a mistake you made during your time here on CactusMC. How did you fix that mistake? What did you learn from it?

    One of my biggest mistakes was calling a staff member the N-word a lot. I learned that i should watch what I say to people online because they could take it the wrong way and end up doing something that I never intended for them to do. And also I don't particularly regret my decisions of admitting to hacking, otherwise I wouldn't do it in the begin then. But since then i made better decisions on the way i treat people and the way i play.

    Tell us your previous server moderation experience, with proof if applicable. If you lack previous experience, why should this not greatly affect your chances as a potential staff member?

    I have had a little experience with a couple of my friends on a faction server that we were trying to make. But i don't think it should greatly affect my staff application because i have been with breach (Cactus-MC) For about 3-4 years now and i have seen some things that staff has done right and some done wrong witch i have stepped in and said something about it to a staff member before because it wasn't right for them to do what they did. I also think someone needs to start somewhere to become staff and learn a thing or two. I think it should be me because I've been with Breach(Cactus-MC) for a while now.

    Tell us your greatest strengths. How would these help you during your time staffing, if accepted?

    My biggest strength is hearing people about what they have done and to figure out a way to resolve it with the lowest amount of punishment needed. Also I have a lot of time on my hands to sit down and stare at my screen. I also have a good amount of patients with people having to hear them out and what they have to tell me or what that i need to know.

    What about your greatest weaknesses? How do you get past them?

    I don't really have any weaknesses and i believe that I am a great person. The only one weakness that I know that I have is if someone is talking trash in chat or making fun of someone for no reason towards a friend(real life Friend) Or (in game friend) i will instantly try and stand up for them and get staff on to try and take care of it.

    Are you active on our Discord server?

    Yes, I am active on the discord. I look in it about every hour if I'm not doing anything and ready through what people have to say and what they are talking about. I don't say much in the discord because I have no reason right now to do so.

    Is there anything else you would like to add?

    I think I'm a real easy person to get along with and have a good time with making jokes and stuff like that. And i love breach(Cactus-MC) please bring back quicker.
    Good afternoon Alan,

    You have a well done application with good detail.

    A key detail in your application is capitalization, you have a few errors with it with I’s and such. Like TinyLaser said about the (.And), try to stay away from starting the sentence with that because it’s not proper, “also” is another word that you should try avoiding and make the two sentences combined. TinyLaser said most of the important stuff that is the main focus so I’d recommend working mainly on what he’s said.

    Good Luck.
     

    Supidly

    Member
    Hello Alan,
    Just a few things to mention. You were yelling at the owner, persistently spamming chat. A player told you to stop and you got mad and argued with him. Then, I told you that the owner himself doesn't deal with staff applications and that the manager does, you kept asking...

    Also you could separate the questions from the answers. Or color coordinate would be the best move to do. Also just a lot of other small details such as capitalizing the "I"s, making complete sentences, etc.
    Anyhoo, Good Luck +0

    -"supildy"
     

    IIISHIII

    Member
    In-Game username: IIISHIII
    DiscordTag (ex. Name#1234): Juice Wrld#9625
    First name (optional): alan
    Current age: 13
    Timezone: Western European Standard Time



    What server(s) are you the most active on? What is it about that particular gamemode that keeps you interested?

    Breachpvp.com (Cactus-MC.net), OneShotmc.com I like doing base stuff talking to staff members about things and raiding bases with my boys, also mainly pvping. I play more of red faction because I don't really like Op factions such as yellow was way to OP and red is just the right amount of OP factions with its stacked armour. What keeps me most active on red is the players that play on red such as my friends that play on it and a couple other people that use to play on old breach that still plays on red today.


    Why should we choose you over any other applicant?

    You shouldn't choose me over any other applicant because they could have better application and they might know a little bit more than me. But also you should choose me over anyone else because I spent a lot of time on the server and try to get to know everyone on the server so if I need them they could help me out.

    Name a mistake you made during your time here on CactusMC. How did you fix that mistake? What did you learn from it?

    One of my biggest mistakes was calling a staff member the N-word a lot. I learned that I should watch what I say to people online because they could take it the wrong way and end up doing something that I never intended for them to do. And also I don't particularly regret my decisions of admitting to hacking, otherwise I wouldn't do it in the begin then. But since then i made better decisions on the way i treat people and the way i play.

    Tell us your previous server moderation experience, with proof if applicable. If you lack previous experience, why should this not greatly affect your chances as a potential staff member?

    I have had a little experience with a couple of my friends on a faction server that we were trying to make. But I don't think it should greatly affect my staff application because I have been with breach (Cactus-MC) For about 3-4 years now and I have seen some things that staff has done right and some done wrong witch I have stepped in and said something about it to a staff member before because it wasn't right for them to do what they did. I also think someone needs to start somewhere to become staff and learn a thing or two. I think it should be me because I've been with Breach(Cactus-MC) for a while now.

    Tell us your greatest strengths. How would these help you during your time staffing, if accepted?

    My biggest strength is hearing people about what they have done and to figure out a way to resolve it with the lowest amount of punishment needed. Also I have a lot of time on my hands to sit down and stare at my screen. I also have a good amount of patients with people having to hear them out and what they have to tell me or what that i need to know.

    What about your greatest weaknesses? How do you get past them?

    I don't really have any weaknesses and I believe that I am a great person. The only one weakness that I know that I have is if someone is talking trash in chat or making fun of someone for no reason towards a friend(real life Friend) Or (in game friend) I will instantly try and stand up for them and get staff on to try and take care of it.

    Are you active on our Discord server?

    Yes, I am active on the discord. I look in it about every hour if I'm not doing anything and ready through what people have to say and what they are talking about. I don't say much in the discord because I have no reason right now to do so.

    Is there anything else you would like to add?

    I think I'm a real easy person to get along with and have a good time with making jokes and stuff like that. And I love breach(Cactus-MC) please bring back quicker.
     

    Empuse

    Sr Moderator
    Staff member
    In-Game username: IIISHIII
    DiscordTag (ex. Name#1234): Juice Wrld#9625
    First name (optional): alan
    Current age: 13
    Timezone: Western European Standard Time



    What server(s) are you the most active on? What is it about that particular gamemode that keeps you interested?

    Breachpvp.com (Cactus-MC.net), OneShotmc.com I like doing base stuff talking to staff members about things and raiding bases with my boys, also mainly pvping. I play more of red faction because I don't really like Op factions such as yellow was way to OP and red is just the right amount of OP factions with its stacked armour. What keeps me most active on red is the players that play on red such as my friends that play on it and a couple other people that use to play on old breach that still plays on red today.


    Why should we choose you over any other applicant?

    You shouldn't choose me over any other applicant because they could have better application and they might know a little bit more than me. But also you should choose me over anyone else because I spent a lot of time on the server and try to get to know everyone on the server so if I need them they could help me out.

    Name a mistake you made during your time here on CactusMC. How did you fix that mistake? What did you learn from it?

    One of my biggest mistakes was calling a staff member the N-word a lot. I learned that I should watch what I say to people online because they could take it the wrong way and end up doing something that I never intended for them to do. And also I don't particularly regret my decisions of admitting to hacking, otherwise I wouldn't do it in the begin then. But since then i made better decisions on the way i treat people and the way i play.

    Tell us your previous server moderation experience, with proof if applicable. If you lack previous experience, why should this not greatly affect your chances as a potential staff member?

    I have had a little experience with a couple of my friends on a faction server that we were trying to make. But I don't think it should greatly affect my staff application because I have been with breach (Cactus-MC) For about 3-4 years now and I have seen some things that staff has done right and some done wrong witch I have stepped in and said something about it to a staff member before because it wasn't right for them to do what they did. I also think someone needs to start somewhere to become staff and learn a thing or two. I think it should be me because I've been with Breach(Cactus-MC) for a while now.

    Tell us your greatest strengths. How would these help you during your time staffing, if accepted?

    My biggest strength is hearing people about what they have done and to figure out a way to resolve it with the lowest amount of punishment needed. Also I have a lot of time on my hands to sit down and stare at my screen. I also have a good amount of patients with people having to hear them out and what they have to tell me or what that i need to know.

    What about your greatest weaknesses? How do you get past them?

    I don't really have any weaknesses and I believe that I am a great person. The only one weakness that I know that I have is if someone is talking trash in chat or making fun of someone for no reason towards a friend(real life Friend) Or (in game friend) I will instantly try and stand up for them and get staff on to try and take care of it.

    Are you active on our Discord server?

    Yes, I am active on the discord. I look in it about every hour if I'm not doing anything and ready through what people have to say and what they are talking about. I don't say much in the discord because I have no reason right now to do so.

    Is there anything else you would like to add?

    I think I'm a real easy person to get along with and have a good time with making jokes and stuff like that. And I love breach(Cactus-MC) please bring back quicker.
    Go to the bottom of your first application, click edit and paste this application in place of your first one.
     
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